First Draft ( major project)
It's day seven. She had her light on the whole night, in her pajamas she wandered across an empty room.
Why you haven't slept I asked, she did not answer.
Framed in white gold she stood still across the street, just a reach away. I swore to my self I could smell her hair- coconut oil with a gentle hint of biscuit. Knock on a door.
Two young men were in front of me, cheeks red as meatballs.
- We here to fix the boiler
I pointed at the bathroom and so they went.
She was gone.
- So basically we have to order a new part - guy number one started, it will take three to four days to come - the second one finished, As his eyes passed through my kitchen a grim smile appeared on his face. - I guess you will have to use a kettle for a little while he added.
She was still gone
- Okay, thank you.
Tweedledee and Tweedledum.
Good start on this short draft I think a little reflection on this at the end on how you will improve and develop this would be good - keep posting drafts of your work and make sure you have really thought about your presentation of this work at the ned on your website
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