I have done some editing, I tried to give more attention to the protagonist's feelings towards a teacher. Also, showcase his need for belonging and the internal fear. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When she entered the room, the class did not go quiet, as usual. The other kids did not notice her . She entered quietly, looked around and quickly made her way to the teacher’s desk. She walked so fast that her scarlet hair stayed in the air for a while, drifting, as if the wind was just waking up and still not making a sound. A few of the kids now realised that this unfamiliar woman was staring at the class from the teacher’s desk. Whispers flew around the classroom and everyone now had their eyes on her. ‘My name is Becky, I will be covering Ms Danger for a while,’ she said. She told us that she came from Utah, but she had just gotten her degree from University of Chicago. She was so happ...